My first day in malaysia ,very exciting. The person of here is friendly.The climate is very hot,but I like it.
TITLE SHOULE BE LIKE THIS:MY FIRST DAY IN MALAYSIA.
CORRECTIONS:My first day in Malaysia WAS very exciting. The PEOPLE here ARE friendly. The climate is very hot but I like it.GOOD EFFORT!!!!
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TITLE SHOULE BE LIKE THIS:
MY FIRST DAY IN MALAYSIA.
CORRECTIONS:
My first day in Malaysia WAS very exciting. The PEOPLE here ARE friendly. The climate is very hot but I like it.
GOOD EFFORT!!!!
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